I haven't done 504 on that pair but all the others work. I think in 515 you may have a close elution of a few on one column that do resolve on the other. If you can't get 515 to work on the CLP pair then you can try a 5 phase and a 35 phase, those seem to work ok, but one will have a longer retention time for the final peak than the other by a few minutes.
For 552.3, if you are diluting with the extraction solution that includes the internal standard, it concentration should not change for the internal since you are diluting with a solution that is the same concentration as the sample is, as mentioned the surrogate will be lower by the dilution factor so a 5 dilution would make a 10ppb surrogate into a 2ppb ect.
It is actually one of the good things about the 552.3, you don't need to figure out how much internal to add to the diluted sample to compensate for the volume of diluent.